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Sonnet 18 Revision.
May I compare you to a warm summers night?
You are more beautiful then the rest,
You shine brighter then the star light,
Now how long our love shall last is the test,
Your voice the sound of angles song,
Everyday with you is a peaceful calm,
I'm unable to part with you for too long,
My heart in your palm,
You shall be my eternal summers eve,
And I your moon you will see,
I promise to be with you and to never leave,
Forever together we shall be,
I shall love you till I die,
For eternity you and I.

So here is my revision of Shakespeare's Sonnet 18.