Sunday, August 29, 2010

Sonnet 18

Can i compair u 2 a summer day?
ur really hot
wind shakes ur buds
summer is 2 short
the sun is 2 hot
u'll never be ugly
u'll never die
this poem gives u life

1 comment:

  1. nice poem ben, we didn't get the hw to do that because we had a short period, but yours sounds really good. Thumbs up

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